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Like many other Man Writing A Romance blog fans, I have been anxiously awaiting the release of this book, the romance novel Dave has been so diligently working on and blogging about since I have known him.
Having recently read the book myself, I would dub this "romantic suspense" because I was hanging on the edge of my seat through most of it. Oh, there's a romance in the story--a really good one--but there is a lot more. I kept getting interrupted with phone calls while I was reading it and told Dave I had to call people back and apologize for being rude when I was done.
In this post, I asked Dave to talk a bit more about Lara who is the heroine in Fast Lane.
Donna: I know you were
struggling with determining the optimal physical size of the ideal heroine. Did you decide if her size
mattered?
Dave: I know that size can be important to women. I firmly believe
it’s possible for everyone to find that someone who either doesn’t care about
size--“too big” or “too small” or whatever. I guess that’s part of the romantic
in me, but I see evidence of it every day. That in no way, however, diminishes
the depth of feeling women have about their bodies, height, weight, or whatever.
In this book, the
size of the heroine, Lara, does matter. The central male character, Clay, is an
international playboy-type whose trademark is “The Rotation,” three beautiful
women who are with him 24/7. Every six months, one member of The Rotation is
replaced with a new one. So Lara has to appeal to Clay on that level.
Or so she believes. Turns out, Lara’s not 100% typical of
The Rotation. She’s older and less busty than previous members.
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Anyway, I had regular input from lots of women while I was
writing Fast Lane--writer’s group
members, people who read my Man Writing a Romance blog, my wife Mary Jo--and
there is a point in the story when it becomes necessary to say Lara’s exact
size. I had typed in 8 as a placeholder, but I asked all my audiences if that
sounded right, or if 10 or some other size would be better. The responses were
sometimes funny and always enlightening.
Some women said, “Why not 12 or 14 or 16?” I know some of
those women. I believe they wear 12 or 14 or 16. One woman I know who’s very
petite said, “Why not 4?” This demonstrates, I think, the complexity of the
issue. Women who wear larger sizes are self-conscious about being “large,”
while women who wear smaller sizes are self-conscious of being “small.” But
I’ve know tall men and short men who experience similar emotions.
The third group of respondents I refer as the “story
pragmatists.” Their answers were usually like, “Lara has to fit into that
world, so she’d have to be an 8 or a 10, even a 6.” It was their answers that
made me feel confident in making Lara a size 8.
Donna: What did walking in
Lara's shoes creatively teach you?
Dave: Okay, here’s something I always knew, but didn’t really
think about from day to day:
It’s much harder in our
society to be a woman than a man. I’m talking about things like clothing sizes,
what clothes should be worn with which other clothes where and when, makeup,
body hair, hair styles, shoes.
My wife almost never wears makeup. It was like that when we
met 32 years ago, and it’s always been that way. I’m glad. I’m not convinced
women who wear lots of makeup have to.
Here’s a funny story: My daughter decided when she was in
college not to shave her arm pits or legs. I found myself not really caring
about her legs--though I do love the way freshly shaved legs feel--but appalled
by her pits. I’m not the kind of dad who would make a fuss about this--it’s her
body, right? But I actually did say something, trying to be as discreet as
possible and making it clear it was just my personal opinion. I realize there’s
no reason for me to have this bias, but I do. (I felt okay mentioning this
because my daughter was raised to be confident in herself and to stick by her
guns.)
I think it again demonstrates how complicated these issues
are. One time, the women in my writer’s group said they were glad they weren’t
young and would therefore “have to” wax and spray tan and get nail extensions
and do a bunch of other kinds of maintenance--and here I was, having
experienced almost the opposite
philosophy. I guess what crowd you run with matters.
Donna: Now that you've finished your romance, what's next for you creatively?
Dave: I have a novel called Chick
Flick that I wrote before this book.
Like PSH, it’s funny. But
unlike PSH, it’s pretty dark
and puts its central characters through a truly hellish night of the soul. It
also has a male protagonist, but one woman who’s read it said that for all its
darkness, it’s romantic at its core. I’m having a couple people read it to see
what they think.
In the meantime, I’ve written twenty screenplays, including
six that have female protagonists. I’ve already started updating one, Metal Mom, which is about a woman who
resumes her heavy metal singing career when her kids are in high school. It was
optioned a couple times and even had Michelle Phillips signed to play the lead.
It never got made, though, so I’m going to take it and a few other scripts directly
to the people while I’m working on Chick
Flick.
Donna: Just one more FYI about Dave, he's published his blog to a quick downloadable book that encapsulates his best posts for a year. This is also available for sale at Amazon. Click here to see the blog book. The cover on it is hysterical--I mean "amazing". Sorry Dave....You look great. Really.
Donna: Just one more FYI about Dave, he's published his blog to a quick downloadable book that encapsulates his best posts for a year. This is also available for sale at Amazon. Click here to see the blog book. The cover on it is hysterical--I mean "amazing". Sorry Dave....You look great. Really.
3 comments:
You know, it's always fun to read romances written by a man. At RT last year, Barry Eisler was reading excerpts from misc. books, and we had to decide if the author was male or female. It was intriguing listening to word choices. I'll admit, I only guessed right about half the time. Little indicators give it away- descriptions of cars the women authors wouldn't care about, visual cues we don't usually pick up on.
Your work sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read it!
I should play that guessing game some time and see how close to fifty percent I get.
My day job is writing a column and articles about car technology, and I know some women are regular readers. That said, my editor relies on me when it comes to gadgets because she's more interested in the business end of the industry and people. I have, though, written several articles about the architecture and decor of renovated showrooms.
Several women read Fast Lane before I published it, and none of them said their eyes glazed over when they got to parts that involve cars--for which I am grateful.
I'm also grateful to you, JM, not only for saying you'll give Fast Lane a chance, but also for mentioning Barry Eisler and me in the same paragraph. More or less.
Dave
Contratultions!
A women's wardrobe takes years, even for women to understand and put together.
Well, I think you have a great writers name. It has a certain ring to it.
Very interesting. I look forward to reading you!
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